I have now received 2 sets of feedback from friends and though they are very positive about the overall concept and certain aspects of the story I have some polish to apply before I am ready for the second round of editing.
One feature of Word that I am loving is the compare function. I have never had a reason to use it before today and I am in love with it!!
A sneak preview. If you squint your eyes and tilt your head you can almost tell they are words.