When creating a world with its own form of magic the key is in the details. Knowing how the magic works, can anyone learn the magic, is it passed from person to person or are people born with it. What is societies view of magic? And all good magic should have some downside or a flaw.
After my first draft I had most of these details but I have been refining them. I have a much clearer process for how the magic is cast and now I am just nutting out some of the physical implications.
One decision would work well will the current sequence of events but I’m not sure if the method it right with the magic. The other method feels better with the magic and requires I reasonable rewrite.
I still have a few things to work though before I decide, but I have to do it quickly as I’m still playing catch up after last weeks deadline failure.